A Creative Writing portfolio (back from a brief hiatus in which I almost drowned in Heidegger)

Wednesday, November 10, 2010

Wave Hello Back

Falling falling falling
orange cramp
splay, contract, pull away
chairs times twenty
sleep would be nice
      (blink repeatedly to stay awake)
streaks of blue
rain spattered panes
wave hello back
     be polite
     he's almost dead.

Dip, sway East
and back and swish
onomatopoeia
twitch
somber feelings abound

breathe

lazy faces, hands, tunes
thumbs tap. softly

Cold spreading to the other side
Forget, just forget
     It's nothing
     Pretend it's nothing
         that's all it is anyways

1 comment:

  1. @ A@ <3 Mesmerizing. I love how it sounds when you read it out loud.

    [ be polite
    he's almost dead.]
    [ It's nothing
    Pretend it's nothing
    that's all it is anyways ]

    Personally, those are my favourite lines. <3'

    Good job!

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